on some deleted poem
24 Apr 2004, 2:56 PM
short sweet and powerful
on the salt shaker by elizabethann
24 Apr 2004, 3:00 PM
powerful and full of emotion. solid structure that gives me a strong sense of breaks and the intended rhythm...peace
mike
ps: if you didnt know, im the dude who IMed you earlier
mike
ps: if you didnt know, im the dude who IMed you earlier
on sexy by elizabethann
24 Apr 2004, 3:02 PM
i really like this one. solid topic and powerful portrayal of your feelings. once again, powerful structure to set the rhythm and speed of the poem...keep it up...peace
mike
mike