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Free verse № 100747

To Who Ever Wrote That Roller Coaster Poem...

by Fear of Garbage

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 May 2004 · 3 comments

You wanted to go up but I only go down. What was that you said About my bloody mouth? You're not responsible for it. "Build it up. Take a ride on it. I'm not responsible if you come out With a broken nose or bloody mouth."

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3 comments

[8] deleted user 6-May-04/12:12 PM Reply
Maybe it was "Loser" by Dan garcia-Black.
[7] Sasha 6-May-04/7:52 PM Reply
One third rediculous, one sixth pointless, and half-vivid.

You have therefore earned yourself a -7-

[8] wilco › Sasha 7-May-04/3:29 PM Reply
You know, you really should write something good yourself before you go around making smart ass comments on peoples' poems.