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Bodies Bore Like I Do Too

by fevriere

Member since 2004 · Posted 10 May 2004 · 2 comments

The dark infatuates a dry mind. Sex's butterfly buzz flows and floods And feels into the red error of my heart. Ignore my drying, dying love and dance mindless to the wordless thud.

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[8] Sasha 10-May-04/4:11 PM Reply
What?

Okay, after the 4th re-read I happened to get it.

Not bad
[7] richa 11-May-04/7:06 AM Reply
Sex is a butterfly but a butterfly does not buzz
and a buzz does not flow
nor does it flood.