No name for the poem...Lost in emptiness

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 May 2004 · 2 comments

Time to Time â¦passing by the same way Though void to void of the day â¦. Close to darkness faced to my infiniteness Emptiness to my poems â¦ Hopelessness to my dreamsâ¦ All carrying to my vain then to my brain And then thousands of nightmares come out Poor down to the poorest fantasy of my imagination Crown such despair in the throne of kingdom Lost in the sense of absence Just tears has seized the sadness And breezed to my madness End up in whispers of nobody into my ears Fading into my fears Word by word â¦they are useless tries to be As yesterday I was â¦â¦..

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[n/a] Prince of Void 16-May-04/12:40 PM Reply

emptiness is my business ....despair is my blood

[5] sliver 16-May-04/7:41 PM Reply

Then one would think you might know how to spell vein.