done than said

Member since 2004 · Posted 18 May 2004 · Edited 26 May 2004 · 2 comments

i found myself dialling your number after you turned me away not once, twice or thrice even you greet me as if you missed me talk like we're still together even ask me to call back the conversation drags and you ask me to decide on what i really want i know what i want don't you see or feel it? do i need to tell you? after everything i did? i guess so... but never forget some things are better done than said...

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[9] edpeterson 19-May-04/9:40 AM Reply

I don't like the last stanza. up until then, i had 10.

[7] wilco 20-May-04/1:18 PM Reply

just a word of advice...stop naming your poems "untitled". Surely you can come up with a name for them. That title just makes the whole thing boring even if it isn't.