poemranker ::Ten by horus8

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 102902

Ten

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 May 2004 · 6 comments

One of the best albums ever A big freeway in California The size of a porn star's cock (in inches) Nice if it's in thousands Normally around when I wake up Painful, if you're a bottom Two shy of a dozen Great sum for a list Pleasant depth for a pool Not perfect, but close enough Too early to call it a night A time that death should avoid My first kiss Tag is still cool And German dodge ball Almost a party One less than eleven A gymnast's dream and a swimmer's etc... Too many kids, dogs, cars, birds - - girlfriends Ten more than zero Zero beside a 1 A smoke break in minutes Double knuckle sandwich another reason to write one more shit poem.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 7.54 weighted 6.86 rank 293 views 295 View voting details →

13 votes so far. Yours would make 14.13 votes so far

6 comments

[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-May-04/11:24 PM Reply
You never cease to amaze.
[9] Shuushin 22-May-04/5:24 AM Reply
A fresh thought well said.
[9] Dan garcia-Black 23-May-04/11:13 AM Reply
A donut lying next to a maple bar on a plate next to linen-wrapped silverware after a weight watcher meeting when you find out you've gained__ lbs.
[n/a] pain killer › Dan garcia-Black 2-Jun-04/2:20 PM Reply
one of the worst poems ever
a big head in california
the size of horus8's ego
painful if you are a poem
by horus8
[n/a] horus8 › pain killer 2-Jun-04/2:29 PM Reply
I'm nuder than you? Are you upset at me for something?
[n/a] horus8 › Dan garcia-Black 2-Jun-04/3:18 PM Reply
I've gotten ridiculously fat in order to properly cover bradley noel