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STEP 4

by the codeine kid

Member since 2004 · Posted 2 Jun 2004 · 4 comments

STEP 4: Make an inventory of your life Take a video camera and record it all Every sordid detail Now you have a movie compiled of all the crap that goes to make up your worthless existence And any time you want you can, rewind, recall and replay Over and over and over again Bring some friends If you stll have any left Have a beer or two MAYBE JUST A SOFT DRINK Hey, this one's called "The Worst Of My Life...Part 2" And it's all here for my convenience Over and over and over again Now how helpful is that? Those who forget the past are condemned to repeat it

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[9] titan69 2-Jun-04/12:22 PM Reply
not everyone has a shit life like you !!!

like your poems though
[n/a] the codeine kid › titan69 2-Jun-04/1:15 PM Reply
ha thanks titan...although this is not autobiographical..it's made up y'know...as a matter of fact my life is very much...ah okay you got me i have a shit life...how'dya guess?..i've just been through the wringer recently..i'll get over it though...just gotta write a few more poems i guess...art as personal therapy and all that..now let me check out some a your stuff..i'm still very much a newcomer to this site...still finding my way around
[7] edpeterson 2-Jun-04/12:43 PM Reply
would be much better without that last line...eek that is horrible.
[8] wilco 2-Jun-04/2:02 PM Reply
I liked it up until the very last line.