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Free verse № 104563

Basic

Member since 2004 · Posted 7 Jun 2004 · 1 comment

I wonder sometimes about you what does go on inside we are connected by the most basic of things yet why why can't i see why can't i see you looking at me you are there i know yet there is more did I move u did I did I see you did i see all of you deep inside i know the answer and although it is impossible to go beyond what i am I ache

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[8] sliver 8-Jun-04/4:04 PM Reply
I doubt it, We can never see who someone is entirely.