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Fool

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Jun 2004 · 7 comments

I donât know who to trust Who to believe Drowned in these lies Pulled under by deceit The past has caught up with me No chance of breaking free.

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7 comments

[5] titan69 8-Jun-04/1:50 PM Reply

Go know! before its to late!!

[7] zodiac › titan69 8-Jun-04/9:14 PM Reply

SCIENTIST IN SOME SECRET MONITORING FACILITY [to himself, munching apple]: Hmm, that's odd... The failure rate in Yorkshire just shot up 10 Langerhans! Must be a glitch in the sensor array...

[10] sliver 8-Jun-04/3:54 PM Reply

Trust in God

[4] <~> 9-Jun-04/7:03 PM Reply

and? come on now. you can do better than that.

[7] Shuushin 11-Jun-04/8:26 PM Reply

Wow. This one is getting lots of traffic, isn't it? Never a bad thing.

I'd like to see this expanded; fleshed out a bit - and it will be better for it.

[n/a] arduinn › Shuushin 11-Jun-04/11:49 PM Reply

i'll do that.. but give me some time ya.. thanx

[7] redneck_woman3322 5-Oct-04/5:14 PM Reply

this could be a really intense poem if you did expand on it...( gosh I hate giving advice)....lots of emotions left unsaid here I think....