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With Reckless Abandon

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Jun 2004 · 6 comments

A bastard corination destroying effigies Frail ghosts haunting idle junctures Kissing loud mouths Never opposing prayer Quilted rivers Strange temptations Underneath vibrant water X-chromosomes yielding zilch

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[n/a] MacFrantic 9-Jun-04/3:13 PM Reply

If god'swife is so keen on that little *2*, then I suggest that a reason be provided.

Anything below a 3 without so much as scant resonance of a rationale is total bullshit*

[n/a] richa › MacFrantic 9-Jun-04/3:28 PM Reply

Having taken time to untangle all the adjectives she was probably pissed off to realise that the poeme was complete gibberish.

[n/a] MacFrantic › richa 9-Jun-04/6:51 PM Reply

Now, I wouldn't say gibberish, exactly. I used these terms metaphorically, which is ironic when the whole thing is a metaphor itself.

[8] zodiac › MacFrantic 9-Jun-04/5:10 PM Reply

"Anything below a 3 without so much as scant resonance of a rationale is total bullshit" is total bullshit. -2.999999-

[n/a] MacFrantic › zodiac 9-Jun-04/6:49 PM Reply

I know! I was so proud of that!

[10] edpeterson 10-Jun-04/6:24 AM Reply

everything above 3 and everything below, to infinity, is total bullshit. 10