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Dealer (a senyru)

by Mona Lisa

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Jun 2004 · 4 comments

A Derelict house, abloom in dead hibiscus dreams are sold cheaply.

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4 comments

[n/a] Mona Lisa 15-Jun-04/3:21 PM Reply
5-7-5 structure like a haiku, but not of nature but of life.
[10] Shuushin 15-Jun-04/3:25 PM Reply
EXCELLENT. and you even called it the right name!
[10] god'swife 15-Jun-04/3:30 PM Reply
Thwere should be a period at the end of the 3rd line, or no puncuation at all.
[9] Doug 15-Jun-04/7:27 PM Reply
Well done!