Lyric № 105368

Misconscrew

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Jun 2004 · 2 comments

Insane is what they called me But the never really knew how much pain you must have to suffer before you really get screwed A Complacation that will be passed Fear, Agony, Trust, and Darkness that Will ever Last Left 4 lust, 21 or bust all their is. is rage their was never any trust Bullshit, Mayhem, Misconscrew All I really have to say is Fuck you! We will over come, Some way or another we will surpass everything in our past, Be victor to are enemies, This Darkness will no longer last, Fear, Agony, Hate will pass We will no longer be fucked, but the pain stills here Scared, Sacrificed, and kicked to dust till the end is here and it's still just 21 or bust

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[7] hatedestruction 16-Jun-04/8:22 AM Reply

nice poetry, but you need to work on your grammar skills, punctuation... and a little spelling.. but other than that, I like it

[6] god'swife 21-Jun-04/7:06 PM Reply

Check the typos. If the music rocks hard enough this could be pretty good. As a poem it's too simplistic for my tastes, but with it's got loads of commitment.