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Member since 2004 · Posted 16 Jun 2004 · 1 comment

the first day the virgin sky is blue and white is the cloud the first man blank the first sun shined and shines now but the stars fell leaving a black emptiness.

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[5] god'swife 22-Jun-04/12:11 PM Reply

Could you change 'but' to 'though' or some such thing?

I don't understand the title.