Free verse № 106552
upon driving through rural Washington
As I drive through farm country,
a damp reek brewing by the roadway
hits me. Manure, cut grass, honeysuckle,
spearmint. The air feels light as rusk.
I want to lie down in the newly turned
earth: this heavy figure amid the wheat-chaff and the chicory,
while sunlight creeps up a mountainside
off in the distant whelm of colour.
Each cemetery, flanked by poplars, looks ready
to play as a chess set. A dozen washloads
blow on the line, sock lanterns ablaze,
towles bellied like a schooner's spinnaker.
In a dogwood's petalled salon, bees leave
their pollen footprints as calling cards.
The occasional samba of a dragonfly
tightens the puffy-lidded dusk.
Clouds being to curdle overhead. And I want
to lie down with you here again in this boggy dirt,
our legs rubbing like locusts'.
I want you here with the scallions,
sweet in the night air, to lie
down with you one more time,
heavy in my arms, and take root.
6 comments
quite a few nice bits in here as I read it again. I hope I don't seem to ignore those when I say much of it is smothered by one, two and three letter crap words.
Try a version without them for your own viewing, tell me if you don't like it.
quite nice bits here read again. hope don't seem ignore those when much smothered three letter crap words.
version without them your viewing, tell don't like.
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