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Free verse № 106874

South Shore

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Jun 2004 · 1 comment

Here, I've sank a hundred fathoms into a sea of sorrow. A solid darkness is abound around my eyes. Beneath the tide along the undertow the sandbar catches me, there goes my soul. Bellowing below, you hear me In comes your hands reaching. Saving my soul, you took your time to pick me up from this down inside. You shared your heart, now it's welded on mine. You brought me to the light, out of the depths of my own salted eyes.

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[4] god'swife 30-Jun-04/4:53 PM Reply
Bizarre.