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Prose Poem № 107354

The Fourth Of July 2004

by horus8

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Jul 2004 · 1 comment

Tonight, while consuming a late dinner with my wife and son, My son turned to me and said (After a series of loud explosions were heard from a cluster of M-80s out there in 'that' mad-night...) "DAD! Can I look out the window and see what it is?" To which I replied Why bother, whatever 'it' was... It's dead now.

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[7] Prince of Void 14-Jul-04/1:01 PM Reply
that was good..but you know...the last line shows the whole meaning so i love the last line