poemranker ::It's all over now that you're writing so by fevriere

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Free verse № 108656

It's all over now that you're writing so

by fevriere

Member since 2004 · Posted 18 Jul 2004 · 2 comments

Your chance has been our time has been had. Don't waste the papers writing poems; you take the stamp and lick it and stick it to me (you always had the wrong priorities). Label it as an undecipherable metaphor; lean your principles on pleas - just don't waste the paper or the ink on me.

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[8] Dan garcia-Black 19-Jul-04/9:00 AM Reply
Could use some paring
[n/a] fevriere › Dan garcia-Black 20-Jul-04/12:38 AM Reply
Like rhyming couplets? I thought paring was some kind of culinary term.