poemranker ::Adieu by cuddlytiger17

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Free verse № 108682

Adieu

Member since 2004 · Posted 18 Jul 2004 · 3 comments

I don’t wanna be Another forgotten memory Another name lost in the wind I refuse to become your victim So wash away that grin This simply can’t continue You're forcing me to leave I won’t allow you to use me Far scarred to the worst degree You've pushed and you've pulled But never again will you hold control I've already walked away from you My last remark, "Adieu."

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3 comments

[9] electroman1979 19-Jul-04/12:02 AM Reply
good poem -9-
[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › electroman1979 19-Jul-04/10:13 AM Reply
Thanks. :)
[7] Dovina › electroman1979 19-Jul-04/10:21 AM Reply
I agree. I wish you would read my poem, "Sacrament" again and my comment to you.