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Free verse № 109055

peanut butter sandwiches on a hot summer day

by w~* ATHENA *~w

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Jul 2004 · 2 comments

it melts into something that looks like my brother i look at him and smile i say brother.. you look like a peanut butter sandwich your hair is a mess and you are melting into something that looks like honey its hot and we laugh

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[8] INTRANSIT 25-Jul-04/6:22 AM Reply

If this means what I think it does, sad, very sad. Good poem though

[7] edpeterson 25-Jul-04/7:30 AM Reply

did you spread it on toast? or did he shoot it in too deep?