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Wake Up

Member since 2004 · Posted 27 Jul 2004 · 3 comments

Wake up Sprint to burial grounds Pool around you let it be water Cards have spoken Donât wait walls will advance Worlds will shrink ears will give way Cling to a clichÃ© Kiss the poison as the antidote Speak expectations to listen Let fragrance engulf you Did you sleep?

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[n/a] unouluvme 27-Jul-04/11:29 AM Reply

doesnt make sense? i didnt think so.

[6] Dovina 27-Jul-04/12:33 PM Reply

Wish I knew what your are talking about. It sounds like it might be interseting.

[8] Dan garcia-Black 27-Jul-04/7:34 PM Reply

It seems to mean something to me, if I read it thusly,

Wake up
Sprint to burial grounds
Pool around you
let it be water
Cards have spoken
Donât wait
walls will advance
Worlds will shrink
ears will give way
Cling to a clichÃ©
Kiss the poison as the antidote
Speak expectations to listen
Let fragrance engulf you
Did you sleep?

A poem of contradictions. Why not?