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Free verse № 109280

True Feelings

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Jul 2004 · 0 comments

Your only a few hours away, I left you yesterday for a while, But I wish I could of stayed, Your the girl of my dreams, And Im glad your in my life, What would you say, if I asked you to be my wife? I want to hold you and protect you, I want to fill your life with fun, I want to protect C. too, And treat him as my son, We would be the perfect family, And yes they do exist, Our house would be full of love, Full of hugs and always a kiss, Id be proud to have You and C. in my life, For both of you, Id lay down and die!!! And until the day, we live together as one, I will always, for you both, cry, They say not to rush things, But does love have a time, Theres more to this life then we know, Alot of mysterys and rhymes, Shouldnt we just let our hearts be open, And let fate control the clock? With these feelings me and you have with each other, Even if we tried, the pace we could not stop. I have never told any woman before, That I loved her as fast as I did with you, And this time, when I say it, I feel it!!! I m glad you feel it too, Let us embark on our journey together, We as a couple, can survive any course of weather, Your beauty will be the light who guides us through the night, And with us together in love, Everything will be alright, I cant seem to stop writing down just how I feel, But I know our comminment and love is true, And just in case I havent said it enough today, Kasey, I will forever love you!

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