poemranker ::He Will Be Loved by eyrbare

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Free verse № 109685

He Will Be Loved

by eyrbare

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Aug 2004 · 3 comments

His hair is slicked back, dark roots at his scalp. A bright heart on his hip. Sharing his love with Hope, Faith, Karen, Sharon. Falling for Roses, stabbed with Barbs. I will be his delicate Dandelion. A bright, shining, glorious weed of a woman. Full of love.

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3 comments

[n/a] leonxic 3-Aug-04/6:09 AM Reply
I hate him already.
[9] Dovina 3-Aug-04/10:38 AM Reply
I like this quite a bit. Try a line break after "Sharon." Falling for roses and stabbed with barbs is quite nice, reqlly, and recognized.
[5] MacFrantic 3-Aug-04/10:47 PM Reply
If Pinnochio had tear ducts he would weep and if I wasn't so lazy I'd rant. *5*