poemranker ::Secret Love by ForgottenSoul17

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Secret Love

Member since 2004 · Posted 13 Aug 2004 · Edited 14 Aug 2004 · 3 comments

I look into your eyes and I drown into their depths I see into your soul and I am tormented by its rage I start to drown sinking deeper and I am lost Lost in the world you live in and I can't get out So much rage, torment and pain and I try to heal you You push me away though and I try again You keep pushing me away when I get close and I hang my head in defeat I still love you with a deep passion and I must leave you so you can be happy I become jealous of her and I will let it pass I love you so much and you cant see that So I will stay here in the dark and hide behind my mask Mask of solitude and stay sad Stay sad so you will be happy and one day I hope you read this Read this and remember how much I loved you and heal my broken wings once again

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3 comments

[n/a] deleted user 13-Aug-04/11:58 PM Reply
INSIPID You spelled serkert incorrectly.
[7] MacFrantic 15-Aug-04/1:07 AM Reply
Scratch the last line and it is quite decent. *7*
[10] FadedHappiness 16-Aug-04/4:35 PM Reply
*10* ^^ I understand it Rainy, You still have feelings for Adam, But your in love with Josh, .. you still like Adam, because love doesnt just fade away...I understand..wow mircale..hehe ^^