poemranker ::Trust by QuirkyWonder

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Free verse № 110653

Trust

Member since 2004 · Posted 16 Aug 2004 · 1 comment

The bond that makes Every relationship possible Is held in your hands Like an egg Until you squeeze too hard And break it BOOM! Just like that Everything changes Everything is ruined You're now back at Square one Which is way behind Where you first started I gave you my faith That you would be honest But you lied anyway!

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[n/a] sliver 16-Aug-04/10:51 PM Reply
Vote on mine I'll vote on yours!