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Careless Sneezes

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Aug 2004 · 1 comment

Sitting alone at a table for two, with the pieces of my heart scattered recklessly across the checkered tablecloth… Dare I invite you to join me, knowing that merely a careless sneeze from you could blow those pieces to the ground?

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[5] amanda_dcosta 13-Dec-05/8:44 PM Reply
My my... aren't you a very insecure person.