poemranker ::Dark Ally by FadedHappiness

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Dark Ally

Member since 2004 · Posted 21 Aug 2004 · 0 comments

She walks down the lighted street Beaming with happiness She looks down a ally Dark and gloomy She turns down that ally Darks veil covering her happiness Shes all alone down the ally Wondering what could be at the end she continues down it Her beaming happiness put out Now she disappears behind the dark No one notices her No one hears her She nears the end of the dark ally She stops infront of a dark brick wall She turns around to go back But shes surrounded by darkness No way out from the ally Shes stuck there In lonlieness and despair Lost in darks depths With no one to pull her out

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