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Waiting

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Aug 2004 · 1 comment

The days, it seems, have gotten longer And, in their length, have gotten shorter My hours, minutes, seconds are consumed By an ever-present waiting

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[7] Prince of Void 23-Aug-04/1:36 AM Reply
i love this line" by an ever-present waiting"