One Perfect Moment

Member since 2004 · Posted 2 Sep 2004 · 2 comments

Be still This smell This taste This sound Has been arranged into One Perfect Moment For only this instant will it exist Its first breath will be its last As brilliant as a full moon With all its grace and promise As light as a feather As heavy as my heart Be still And watch it drift away

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[10] Dan garcia-Black 2-Sep-04/8:35 AM Reply

Works for me at this perfect moment.-10-

[10] sliver 4-Sep-04/11:23 AM Reply

Only one? I hope there are many more to come.