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Disregardance

by klosterfobik

Member since 2004 · Posted 2 Sep 2004 · Edited 7 Sep 2004 · 18 comments

She empties me, so carefully, with her saddest smile come autumn. She folds me gently with regret, and sets me softly in her soul. Such a warm repose from winter. She lays me just aside, for when the birds come back again.

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18 comments

[7] Brandy_n_Cali 2-Sep-04/11:59 PM Reply
NICE POEM!!
[0] Shardik 7-Sep-04/9:09 PM Reply
'taint bad, but 'taint begging for a publishing neither.
[n/a] klosterfobik › Shardik 8-Sep-04/1:12 PM Reply
I could always just self publish like yourself - Or am I mistaken?
[n/a] zodiac › klosterfobik 8-Sep-04/1:39 PM Reply
You are - though they did actually make the mistake once of publishing a poem called "The Silent Scream" in an anthology entitled "Mind Mutations".
[n/a] klosterfobik › zodiac 8-Sep-04/3:30 PM Reply
Silent Scream is such an easy oxymoron.
[n/a] zodiac › klosterfobik 9-Sep-04/4:45 AM Reply
That was the point.
[10] unnesessary › zodiac 10-Sep-04/9:42 AM Reply
Zodiac,are you from Isreal?
[n/a] zodiac › unnesessary 13-Sep-04/3:25 AM Reply
Of course not. I'm from North Carolina, I just happen to live in the deserts of Islamica now, where even the suggestion of being from Israel would be enough to get me a prompt 'melon treatment' from all the villagefolk. Thanks for trying, though, and way to misspell Israel!
[n/a] klosterfobik › zodiac 18-Sep-04/7:41 PM Reply
Way to misspeak for poets!!!!
[0] Bachus 11-Sep-04/5:35 PM Reply
fuck
[n/a] klosterfobik › Bachus 11-Sep-04/5:59 PM Reply
you?
[n/a] ==Doylum › klosterfobik 11-Sep-04/6:08 PM Reply
No tard
[n/a] klosterfobik › ==Doylum 14-Sep-04/9:45 PM Reply
I think I found u?
[n/a] klosterfobik › klosterfobik 14-Sep-04/9:47 PM Reply
Sorry - I thought it was like reality?
[0] Shardik 15-Sep-04/11:31 AM Reply
Another
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> 15-Sep-04/2:30 PM Reply
A piping hot pound of smegma.
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> 15-Sep-04/2:31 PM Reply
An ass shaped chin flecked with enbrowning sauce.
[10] deleted user › <{Baba^Yaga}> 17-Sep-04/7:19 PM Reply
A childish attempt at humor?