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Disregardance (Free verse) by klosterfobik She empties me,
so carefully,
with her saddest smile come autumn.
She folds me gently
with regret,
and sets me softly in her soul.
Such a warm repose from winter.
She lays me just aside,
for when the birds come back again.
Up the ladder:
Since The Fall
Down the ladder:
The Only Solution
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Posted: September 2, 2004 7:07 PM PDT; Last modified: September 7, 2004 5:59 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.4255967 Overall Rank: 12943 Comments:
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Brandy_n_Cali @ 4.182.108.224
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2-Sep-04/11:59 PM
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NICE POEM!!
'taint bad, but 'taint begging for a publishing neither.
I could always just self publish like yourself - Or am I mistaken?
You are - though they did actually make the mistake once of publishing a poem called "The Silent Scream" in an anthology entitled "Mind Mutations".
Silent Scream is such an easy oxymoron.
That was the point.
Zodiac,are you from Isreal?
Of course not. I'm from North Carolina, I just happen to live in the deserts of Islamica now, where even the suggestion of being from Israel would be enough to get me a prompt 'melon treatment' from all the villagefolk. Thanks for trying, though, and way to misspell Israel!
Way to misspeak for poets!!!!
fuck
you?
No tard
I think I found u?
Sorry - I thought it was like reality?
Another
A piping hot pound of smegma.
An ass shaped chin flecked with enbrowning sauce.
A childish attempt at humor?
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