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Dare

by LintyWeenis

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Sep 2004 · 4 comments

The lights screaming by tonight is our night. My foot to the floor you're screaming my name. Like so many times before Let's see if we make it this time.

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4 comments

[n/a] klosterfobik 8-Sep-04/4:42 PM Reply
Why is she/he screaming your name?
Is it the danger or the size of your penis?
[n/a] LintyWeenis 8-Sep-04/6:09 PM Reply
It's open to interpretation. And who says it's a she?
[5] Dovina › LintyWeenis 9-Sep-04/3:02 PM Reply
Saying that it's open to interpretation is saying the obvious, whether you explain or not. To simply say you're not going to explain is to send me away wondering, unless you think it's so obvious I should know your meaning. Seems to me it needs a lot of help in grammar and clarity.
[n/a] LintyWeenis 11-Sep-04/3:24 PM Reply
Well, I say it's open to interpretation because if someone reads it and thinks that this person is screaming out of excitement, well then that's what they get. I personally wrote it with that person screaming in fear because I'm about to go hallin' ass down a busy freeway. I can see where I could use some clarity but grammar?