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Free verse № 11200

Buried at Sea

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Aug 2002 · 4 comments

Broken waves, Shattered by steel, Stolen echoes, Scattered at its heal, Rocking gently, In my Mother's arms, Saftely nestled, On a burden of harms. I find joy fleating, Beneath a sea of rocks, I lose myself unwilling, Behind a door with no locks, I see no misfits caring, Believing all ships are in their docks.

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4 comments

[n/a] Bachus 24-Aug-02/10:23 PM Reply
check lines 4,7, to fix typos "heal", should be "heel" and "saftetly" should be well you know...just looking out for you bros..editor's advice is golden...
[n/a] brazen 26-Aug-02/5:32 AM Reply
yes, and thank you...i must remember to stop writing while trying to download porn. its too hard to focus.
[7] alexander 26-Aug-02/5:46 AM Reply
porn again poet eh !
[5] blindwriter 3-Apr-05/11:08 PM Reply
*heel
*fleeting
Wandering...choppy...
But concise and full of yummy imagery.