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happiness prescribed

Member since 2004 · Posted 11 Sep 2004 · 2 comments

They say happiness was once hard to come by But its now in a capsule Easy to swallow And impossible to trace Benzodiazipine, riddilin, heroin Give substance to our lives Happiness Prescribed

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[7] LintyWeenis 12-Sep-04/1:10 PM Reply
True.
[7] Bachus 13-Sep-04/3:19 PM Reply
Heroin kicks ass