poemranker ::My girl by bdub420

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Ode № 11219

My girl

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

She is my everything. The air I breathe, the food I need, even the drink of water I enjoy, when she makes me sing. Whitney, that's her name. But she's not around as much anymore, and things just haven't been the same. It's not her fault her mother and I don't get along anymore. But I take care of my baby when she's here, and our relationship is like a video game. I'm trying to get high score.

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 25-Aug-02/9:01 AM Reply
ha! that's funny, funny shit...you should compare all asspics of your life to your video game library immediately. lol! driving test, masturbation, you actually being the winged spectre. DAMNIT D.A i know you're in there bleeting away you bastard! nah..paranoia..i'm okay..DAMNIT MAN COME OUT, I WROTE ye a story. st.Leone of ploimped balohni.. germane for you, my friend...bastard.. with your puppets, damnit man you're perplexing my fondu this fine morning...wait a minute the user name is way outta your griftings..oops sorry kid...smoke a fatty.carry on 7/10