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Cleansing Sudan

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Sep 2004 · Edited 23 Sep 2004 · 2 comments

Black flies on a black hill of eyes. Whiteness from their stare darkens me. Heads bent back oval ling throats caking the street in to musk blots, ‘Darfur’ town is a ‘Pollack’ canvas. The unfashionable living become fashionable news highlight their plight send some clothes and some shoes. Flesh slicks of oiled skin reddens hands not greens them, Africa’s not economically viable Hollywood doesn’t want you sex and celebrities are reliable, You dirty the process being ethnically cleansed. Show the pictures of a smiling black boy, mouth waxed from rice they can live with that. Buy yourself a conscience from a free phone number sell out humanity by switching the channel the black boys gone now, he’s hacking off heads for a uniform and rice.

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[7] daggatolar 24-Sep-04/3:20 AM Reply
black Africa remains the darkest of heart, no thanks to the joint conspiracy of hard shoe leather of "whiteness" imperialism and the black mongols devouring and sending the youngs to live no other lives than the gun
[9] INTRANSIT 27-Sep-04/5:32 PM Reply
Good to see you again, Mr P. Darfur/Pollack. Primo.