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Free verse № 1130

Being You

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Apr 2002 · 2 comments

You are the one that always brightens my day, Knowing always the right things to say. Eyes like the everflowing oceans, They go one forever just like my love I would risk my life for you, Just to know that you would go on. You are a best friend to me, Closer than the eye can see. You have made my life more complete, With your love which no one else's can meet. Your heart is like a sacred rose, Only a special one may have it. Words cannot say what you mean to me, Inside is where those feelings stay. If I were to die tomorrow, My love for you would go on and on and on. No one can ever take your place, Or have your ever so lovely face. Being you is where I want to be, Never letting go of what others cant see.

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[2] anonymous 10-May-02/7:12 PM Reply
all i can say is OMG.....*crys*....umm...this one...ummm...yea....since u know me you should know...*muah*
[10] ==Doylum 19-Jul-02/6:44 AM Reply
Yes I am pretty amazing I know.
But enough of the shmooze I feel quite nauseaous.