Diaries of tears

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Sep 2004 · 2 comments

My hands forward the unseen sun Perhaps itâs illusion of mine In the dawn of nothingness Trying to seize a new day from tears of skies Those tears are rolling on the window of my dreams Drying slowly in the fire of my cold passion for life However that opens my eyes to endless requiems of days And I am feeling missing in melancholic times Lasting or existing in shadows of mortality over and over Rewriting the diaries of tears on the torn twilight of mine Let the doubts bury me within fears of despairs Found me as I am still lost On every page of these diaries The failure to find But theyâre dreams Dreams are still going on

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[8] daggatolar 27-Sep-04/11:33 AM Reply

dreams like the many ,too many outside the few, dying away with the days, you struck a good score on this to your name , how void is our lives.

[n/a] Prince of Void › daggatolar 28-Sep-04/10:18 PM Reply

Thank daggatolar For comment on this poem :
I think you are right , i agree with you....