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Feel Like A Failure

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Oct 2004 · 0 comments

These metallic chains that hold me back Are becoming more resistant everytime I move. And the intelligence that I lack Makes me feel like a failure. This illustrious fantasy that dwells in my mind Is becoming more elaborate everyday. And this unseen, invulnerable wall I hide behind Makes me feel like a failure. I see your vigilant eyes inquiring in the dark. They lurk behind me wherever I journey. Your eyes are like fire and they cast off a spark. They make me feel like a failure.

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