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Pimple № 113491

Nothing's Forever

by cuddlytiger17

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Oct 2004 · 3 comments

Serenity in a misty steam of heaven Silence all around Nothing heard but the softness of my breaths: Inhale. Exhale. All is safe, secure. But then the water runs cold. I let out a yelp of alarm, And realize nothing lasts forever.

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[n/a] Caducus 7-Oct-04/9:01 AM Reply
too good to be a pimple where is the blood and whining?
[9] sliver 8-Oct-04/7:03 PM Reply
Nothing like a nice hot shower huh?
[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › sliver 8-Oct-04/8:18 PM Reply
lol nopes. gotta love it.