poemranker ::Damn you, Feeling. by Rollsoftoiletpaper

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Damn you, Feeling.

Member since 2004 · Posted 16 Oct 2004 · 6 comments

What makes me different than her? Is it bad that I don't hurt your feelings? Is that what seperates her and me, the fact that I've never broken your heart? I didn't used to care about this. I didn't used to need your acceptance. I didn't used to have to pretend that I'm not hurting. I didn't used to have to write this sappy stuff. But now that I do, and she's at it again all I can do is wonder. What makes me different than her? I'll tell you what. When she's crushed you again and your in the corner of the room, acting like you're not crying, and I come in and I lift you up, and put a temporary band-aid on the wound she's left, and you look at me through reddened eyes and say, "Thanks for being such a good friend." That's what makes me different. All I am is a friend. *to my friend who has ruined my care-free life. I would give this a zero, myself, but I had to get this stuff out.*

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[6] cuddlytiger17 16-Oct-04/6:36 PM Reply
Well I'm glad you got how you were feeling out. Keep your chin up, if that person doesn't realize what a good friend you are, then that's their loss. I know you've probably heard those very same words spoken to you a million times before, but its the truth.

Out of pure curiosity, I'm just wondering how old you are?
[n/a] Rollsoftoiletpaper › cuddlytiger17 16-Oct-04/7:49 PM Reply
16. (junior in HS)
But with all the drama, it seems I should be older.
[6] cuddlytiger17 › Rollsoftoiletpaper 16-Oct-04/8:39 PM Reply
lol same here. But shhh thats our secret. :p
[n/a] zodiac › Rollsoftoiletpaper 17-Oct-04/5:17 AM Reply
Why? Do you think people keep getting more dramatic with age until they explode?
[0] horus8 › zodiac 18-Oct-04/12:20 PM Reply
Yes.
[0] horus8 18-Oct-04/12:19 PM Reply
I think it's Ironic that in this poem you perfectly described... A roll of toilet paper, that's DEEP.

Now, fly the gay winged bat back to uranus.

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