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Member since 2003 · Posted 4 Nov 2004 · 0 comments

shifting lights dance down a dazzling staircase; led by impulse to pantries full of rotten food, step step slip involuntary turn and dusty broken jars, the aroma of decay. dry food scatters to the walls on wagon-wheeled rodents. china shatters in the kitchen above. and running slip grasp pull step step. empty rooms with a tremor the floor is collapsing

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