poemranker ::WHAT YOU GIVE AWAY IS WHAT YOU TAKE TO HEAVEN by ~* ATHENA *~

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Free verse № 115681

WHAT YOU GIVE AWAY IS WHAT YOU TAKE TO HEAVEN

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Nov 2004 · 6 comments

THOUGH YOU SEE HIM THERE PLEASE DON'T TELL A SOUL. THERE WAS A MAN ON VINE HE HAD A LOOK IN HIS EYE AS THOUGH HE KNEW SOMETHING OLD. I BOUGHT HIM A COFFEE AND HE SAID THANK YOU. I TOLD HIM I LIVE IN HANCOCK PARK, HE SAID.... DO YOU HAVE MORE COFFEE? I SAID...... YES SPEAK TO ME OF SUMMER

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6 comments

[4] Bobjim 16-Nov-04/5:17 AM Reply
Wahey!!!
I haven't seen a poemwanker award since mine got taken away. Congratulations!
Maybe I should get mine back to boost the numbers...
[n/a] RGSsparky › Bobjim 16-Nov-04/12:59 PM Reply
Not if i get there slightly before you :D hehehe
[4] Bobjim › RGSsparky 18-Nov-04/4:13 AM Reply
That won't stop me and it will further increase the ranks. It's actually a good thing.
[7] Dovina 16-Nov-04/7:48 AM Reply
The title tells us too much. The all-caps speak too loudly, adding to the preachiness.
[n/a] Stephen Robins › Dovina 16-Nov-04/8:33 AM Reply
Expert insight into the preachiness.
[n/a] fevriere › Stephen Robins 16-Nov-04/2:19 PM Reply
I thought you said you wanted to poke holes in her? Isn't that an expression of endearment?