Lyric № 116357

Hurt

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Dec 2004 · 1 comment

I thought we were friends I thought you wanted me so badly until you found something that has caught your own eye and makes you think it's better than it was. After when the sun rose I saw you with such good happiness and talking to me with respect that made me think you meant it until I saw you with an expression of pure anger and saying the words of hate, disrespect, and pain. When my ears were in front of your mouth my heart has sank with horror, anger, and sadness which describes that I'm hurt and filled with tears in my dark, clear eyes. I may be your friend but you are not the friend that would hurt me and my feelings with your dirty words that can easily sabotage me.

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[2] Stacy Stewart 13-Dec-04/9:36 AM Reply

You have to many mistakes in here. The rhyme is off. Alot of your sentances don't make sence.

Example:
that has caught your own eye
and makes you think
it's better than it was.

that has cought your eye
etc etc...Reread this poem and fix the mistakes.