poemranker ::Reality by blacksoul

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Haiku № 116609

Reality

by blacksoul

Member since 2004 · Posted 16 Dec 2004 · 4 comments

People see God every day; They just don't recognize him.

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4 comments

[10] Bobjim 16-Dec-04/12:55 PM Reply
How unoriginal. I love it. 10
[6] Dovina 16-Dec-04/1:15 PM Reply
The rules of Haiku are precise, and this is not Haiku. Please call it Free Verse. It sounds like an opening statement in need of support or illustration, and capitalization of "Him." Often, when I comment on a religious poem, people think I am putting down the religion, but in this case I am not, only the way it's presented.
[3] Stacy Stewart 16-Dec-04/1:58 PM Reply
what in god's name is this?

Not a Haiku!
[10] jroday 19-Dec-04/3:57 AM Reply
This is not a Haiku. bro. before you start posting stuff. read up on the different kinds of poetry. love ya sis.