AL-NAAFIYSH

by blacksoul

Member since 2004 · Posted 25 Dec 2004 · 6 comments

Antisapation of death, is worse than death itself.

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[8] Dovina 25-Dec-04/10:56 AM Reply

In putting a familiar saying with the name AL-NAAFIYSH, are you commenting on his life or his art? I don't know enough about him to say.

I could comment on the saying, but you're getting at something here that I don't understand.

[n/a] blacksoul › Dovina 25-Dec-04/11:19 AM Reply

Dovina the saying is about my father.
The word AL-NAAFIYSH means the soul.

[8] Dovina › blacksoul 25-Dec-04/11:31 AM Reply

I'm glad I asked instead of going off on some tangent of plagiarism as you saw happen on your other poem.

None of us can know death, except those who claim to have returned. If your father anticipates it, may he do so without fear. Merry Christmas.

[7] Bhaskaryya 8-Jan-05/8:46 AM Reply

Could I make a request?? Next time you rate a zero on a poem, kindly leave a small comment that describes what you hated about the poem, why it sucked and why did it deserve a zero. Every poet works hard on a poem and so they never think they deserve a zero...

[7] Bhaskaryya 8-Jan-05/8:52 AM Reply

Anticipation**

[0] Crakyamuni 8-Jan-05/10:43 AM Reply

Trite.