poemranker ::Christmas Break by Plaidypus

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Christmas Break

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 Dec 2004 · Edited 27 Dec 2004 · 3 comments

I wondered if I still look as pretty as I did in High School; we both knew the answer was no but neither did she. She sat at the counter with me, talking to me, like comfort food, like pancakes her words filled me up with warm, sweet reason "Well you know why, don't you? because every person you meet, you meet them for a reason." And sometimes, when you let a person out of your life, its because they've served their purpose and they were pretty much on their way out already

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3 comments

[10] Lifeboatman 28-Dec-04/5:04 AM Reply
haha.. good.. 10
[7] Dovina 28-Dec-04/6:01 PM Reply
What does the last part of the poem, good as it is, have to do with the first verse?
[9] wilco 15-Feb-05/2:16 PM Reply
See, ok, you wrote poetry here, and it's pretty good.