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Portables

by Shardik

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Dec 2004 · 2 comments

His fence is high, and white Yard immaculately landscaped There are some large Pacific flowers Growing to the sky off of the back patio He listens to his portable radio In the sun, I wonder, what station? Sounds like a shortwave, Remotely Japanese.

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[9] Dovina 28-Dec-04/5:54 PM Reply
Probably some bonsai and orchads too. Probably third generation American.
[n/a] Shardik › Dovina 28-Dec-04/6:06 PM Reply
Good guess.