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Lovelier Than Love

by Bhaskaryya

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Dec 2004 · 6 comments

In my eyes, lives a picture, Lovelier than love itself, she seems. Over-shadowed by this illusion, my existence, Vulnerably attached to all my dreams. Every night in my slumber, she re-appears, Yachting me away to a new world. Over the misty cloudy terrain, I travel, Under the influence of her magical hold. Knocked over by reality at last, As I wake up at the on-set of dawn, Sunshine fills up my world Though it only makes me frown, Until the next mystical night , Re-appears when, my escape, my pretty angel, In whose company, even the darkness appears bright. Acrostic message : I LOVE YOU KASTURI

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[8] Blindpoetry 28-Dec-04/10:43 PM Reply
Votes make it more clear and exact, depending on who comments.

I liked this a lot. Didn't spot any errors. (but was i actually looking? nope)

Flowed well.
[n/a] Bhaskaryya › Blindpoetry 28-Dec-04/10:48 PM Reply
Thanks a lot!!
[10] jroday 30-Dec-04/1:14 AM Reply
I like this poem very much, your skills are getting better. I bless you with a -10-
[n/a] Bhaskaryya › jroday 30-Dec-04/9:04 AM Reply
Ironically I wrote this earlier than the ones I posted before. Perhaps I am deteriorating!!
[10] jroday › Bhaskaryya 31-Dec-04/12:33 PM Reply
No I dont think so. Perhaps I am getting to old to keep up with you young people at age fifty (smile)
[10] *.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* 9-Feb-05/5:10 PM Reply
nice