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Life is my agony

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Jan 2005 · 3 comments

A sentence â¦.â Life is my agony â But? My whys The Pain of yours All Perhaps endless requiems for our tears Terminating us in this silence of unsaid side And dreams canât go on The Emptiness is poisoning us On last monument of awareness I am sorry â¦maybe I am not understandable Thatâs my art Thatâs my beauty Thatâs my voice in the void Rightâ¦I am wrong Canât make me right I must be wrong I must despairs To myself Hurting my mind Take my own happiness down in nothingness Itâs hard to keep this poem in your mind Because I am a sad drunk man without drinking wine Passed you as I am not seen Yep itâs really mixed up Itâs chaos of beauty Things has no end met each other here Full of grammatical problems Its ocean canât be in one empty glass

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[5] Dovina 22-Jan-05/1:27 PM Reply

Oh, for God's sake get over it! Have another drink. Write another poem. Go for a walk. Do something! This sitting around feeling sorry for yourself, well it's selfish and wrong. If I were on the stool next to you I'd buy you a drink.

[7] Shuushin 23-Jan-05/7:35 AM Reply

"I must despairs" is intentional for the second to last line?

Definitely conveys a sense of hopelessness.

[n/a] Prince of Void › Shuushin 23-Jan-05/7:38 AM Reply

yeah u are right ....thank u for ur comment