Free verse № 118950
Never Did You
I couldnât help but feel sad, I couldnât help but cry, but the one thing I couldnât do was get over you.
You took me by surprise, that day long ago. You took my heart on a whirlwind adventure through heaven. The one thing you never did was reveal your feelings for me.
In my nights rest you conquered my dreams, in my days weakness you forced your image into my minds vision. But you never came to my reality to present yourself as mine.
For years youâve been my wish on the first risen star, in recent months youâve been the prayer constantly on my nights lips. Yet in all this time I was never yours.
Last night we had a conversation, my thoughts are confused. Today weâll talk once more, this new girl of yours is the topic. Still tonight you'll let me think I have a chance.
Iâve now realized that things may never be, Iâve now started to try to forget my many feelings. Being in love with love is a cruel reality when it leads to you being in love alone.
I couldnât help but feel sad, I couldnât help but cry, but the one thing I still couldnât do was get over you.
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And read until your eyeballs rupture. That's the only way your going to get close to writing a poem worth criticising. I'm not trying to be hard on you, by the way; that's seriously what everybody who wants to write presentable poetry has to do, and it shows in this poem that you haven't done it. Good luck, and let me know how it comes out!
-zodiac
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