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My concept of existence

Member since 2002 · Posted 31 Jan 2005 · 2 comments

The difference is killing me ..not related to my poem ?! My concept of existence into the particles of the light Beyond the all chaotic mass of light Beyond understanding of mankind I called it Madness of reaching infinity I feel an inner voice’s calling on for reunion With whom I devoted my own existence If I gain mortality but I will achieve my own love The love is insight to see the vision of his face If mind can’t fathom any longer The heart can fathom forever For what I couldn’t understand Taking steps to love

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[n/a] Prince of Void 31-Jan-05/9:11 AM Reply
not related to my poem ?!
[n/a] SupremeDreamer 31-Jan-05/6:31 PM Reply
What is this amassed hubris of catch phrases and vague nonsense? An expression of chaos?

Even anarchy has a hint of form, a subtle rational, a sense of direction. When will you grasp that concept?